The Writing Life: When the Story Stalls
Sometimes a book stalls because the writer's done something that derailed it, or didn't do something to keep it going. I experience stall-effect in the middle of almost every book, so now I expect it (hope it won't appear, but am not panicky when it does.) Doesn't mean I've lost my talent, can't write again, have utterly failed, etc, etc. It's a part of the way my brain interacts with Story-space, and it means some serious work (not wishful thinking) to figure out what I did or did not do *this* time.
Well, this time what I did was go blasting ahead where I knew things were going, trailing a cloud of necessary secondary characters for whom I'd produced some minimal background. They were holding me back, when I started the book, so I wrote ahead of my understanding of them. I start books in a rush--need to get into them quickly, well in, before coming up for air and thought. And then came to the point where all these secondary characters basically sat there, a row of plastic dolls, for me to move around in Story-space. Only that's not acceptable. Secondaries are not puppets; they need to be seen and felt to be acting out of their own reasonable motivations. "Why won't you DO things?" I asked. Little glass eyes stared back.
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Well, this time what I did was go blasting ahead where I knew things were going, trailing a cloud of necessary secondary characters for whom I'd produced some minimal background. They were holding me back, when I started the book, so I wrote ahead of my understanding of them. I start books in a rush--need to get into them quickly, well in, before coming up for air and thought. And then came to the point where all these secondary characters basically sat there, a row of plastic dolls, for me to move around in Story-space. Only that's not acceptable. Secondaries are not puppets; they need to be seen and felt to be acting out of their own reasonable motivations. "Why won't you DO things?" I asked. Little glass eyes stared back.
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